In all of my drawings dA shows this animation as similar of mine. Your intention were make a fanart of the flame princess :[link] Her hair should be higher and, the character have a gem in her forehead, the princess dont have a fringe, and I think that the animation don't gave the effect that you imagined, without it could be better Don't get sad with this critique ok, pratice more and show me your artworks
I know she has a gem on her head and doesnt have a fringe. I was trying to make her sort of my own. and not copy the exact style. As you can see.. this was posted a long time ago.
There are only two frames of her hair, and I think if you made 3 or more then it would flow a lot lot smoother and look better in general. The extra work will pay off ^_~ Still dig it though :>
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